I had really great success with Mai's method this go round (although I think the cuttings I got were naturally strong rooters). I think her secret is soak the cutting for a long time so the cutting has it's own moisture, thus the medium can be drier than usual - prevents rot. Seal the leafing end with wax (no real need to wax the root end). For me, I put the rooting bag inside another ziplock with a slightly damp paper towel in it (which kept the surrounding air extremely humid) until it rooted and started to leaf. I start mine in a water heater closet that stays dark and warm.
After rooting and budding out, I moved the rooted bags into a lidded bin to establish - misting the walls of the bin just a little to provide ambient humidity.
Once in the past, I tried to start cuttings in cups with the cups inside a thin garbage bag. But they dried out. I found a lot of thin plastic (like garbage bags) are breathable so they dry out very quickly. I would definitely make sure your outer bag is thick enough (and sealed) to contain the humidity.
By the way, that white cutting looks a bit like it was dead/dried out before you ever started rooting ???
Good luck to you.