Conrad,
You don't need to angle this type of graft. There are so many possible contacts points that it's difficult that they don't make contact somewhere. Nevertheless, the more contact points the better.
Even if the cuts are not that smooth, if you apply enough pressure you may solve the potential problem of air pockets, Francisco was talking about. I use to tie this graft tightly and cover the whole thing, including the scion buds and tip, with parafilm.
I would try to perfect the end of the bevel cuts, namely making them thinner (like in the following picture - not my picture), http://www.sonneruplund.dk/eng/image/whip1.jpg
so there is not a huge bump between both ends with tends to take much more time to heal and doesn't provide any contact points (making that thinner is not this easy when grafting figs, so don't be too perfect).
If you do make them thinner don't exaggerate the center cutting, so that you don't "overstep" the ends. It's better to be short (cambium layer showing at the tip, like in your case, than to place the tip over the bark).
Also, if using this graft in different diameter scions (sometimes that's inevitable), then do angle them a bit, and place the thinner one to one side, don't leave it in the middle as there won't be adequate contact between cambium layers that way.
A few examples. Not all of them need to be perfect, if they are tied tightly. And not all of them need to be long bevel cuts. It really depends on the scion and rootstock branch we have to work with:




Also, don't remove the ties too soon (i tend to leave mine for a couple of months), the following one was cut 3 months after the graft:

But beware of fast growing varieties in strong rootstocks.
In this case it's better to cut and retie using rubber ties or else you can have something that looks like this:

This one will recover, but some might be left with very thin and weak spots and might break later